---
title: "Error analysis bài viết thật — Phân tích 5 bài viết lỗi"
excerpt: "Phân tích lỗi chi tiết 5 đoạn văn Writing VSTEP thật: nhận diện lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng, cấu trúc và cách sửa từng lỗi cụ thể."
kỹ_năng: "Viết"
chuyên_đề: "viet"
mức_độ: "B1-B2"
đơn_vị: "34"
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canonical: "https://tuyencongchuc.com/on-tap-vstep/vstep-viet-error-analysis/"
type: "bài-ôn-tập-vstep"
---

# Error analysis bài viết thật — Phân tích 5 bài viết lỗi

**Chuyên đề:** viet
**Kỹ năng:** Viết
**Mức độ:** B1-B2
**Đơn vị:** 34

## Error Analysis — Phân tích lỗi 5 bài viết VSTEP thật

Phân tích lỗi (error analysis) là cách học hiệu quả nhất để cải thiện Writing. Dưới đây là **5 đoạn văn mẫu có lỗi** từ bài thi thật, kèm phân tích chi tiết và bản sửa.

### Đoạn 1: Task 2 — Chủ đề giáo dục (B1)

**Bài gốc (có lỗi):**

> Nowaday, education is very important for everyone. Although the government spend a lot of money for education, but many students still cannot go to school. Because they live in remote area and their family are very poor. I think the government should build more school and give scholarship for poor student. If the government do this, the education system will more better.

**Phân tích lỗi:**

| # | Lỗi | Loại | Sửa |
| --- | --- | --- | --- |
| 1 | Nowaday | Chính tả | **Nowadays** |
| 2 | government spend | Hòa hợp chủ-vị | government **spends** |
| 3 | spend money for | Giới từ | spend money **on** |
| 4 | although... but | Liên từ thừa | Bỏ **but** |
| 5 | Because they live... (fragment) | Câu thiếu | Nối vào câu trước bằng dấu phẩy |
| 6 | remote area | Số ít/nhiều | remote **areas** |
| 7 | their family are | Hòa hợp chủ-vị | their **families** are |
| 8 | more school, poor student | Số ít/nhiều | more **schools**, poor **students** |
| 9 | government do | Hòa hợp chủ-vị | government **does** |
| 10 | more better | So sánh | **better** (bỏ more) |

**Bản sửa:**

> **Nowadays**, education is very important for everyone. Although the government **spends** a lot of money **on** education, many students still cannot go to school **because** they live in remote **areas** and their **families** are very poor. I think the government should build more **schools** and give **scholarships** to poor **students**. If the government **does** this, the education system will be **better**.

### Đoạn 2: Task 1 — Thư phàn nàn (B1)

**Bài gốc (có lỗi):**

> Dear sir, I write this letter to complaint about the service in your restaurant. Last Saturday, I go to your restaurant with my family. We wait for 30 minutes but nobody come to take our order. The food was not fresh and the price is very expensive. I hope you will solve this problem and give us a apologize.

**Phân tích lỗi:**

| # | Lỗi | Loại | Sửa |
| --- | --- | --- | --- |
| 1 | Dear sir | Viết hoa | Dear **Sir** |
| 2 | I write | Thì | I **am writing** |
| 3 | to complaint | Loại từ | to **complain** (động từ) |
| 4 | I go, We wait, nobody come | Thì | I **went**, We **waited**, nobody **came** |
| 5 | the price is very expensive | Collocation | the **prices were** very **high** |
| 6 | a apologize | Mạo từ + loại từ | **an apology** |

**Bản sửa:**

> Dear **Sir**, I **am writing** this letter to **complain** about the service at your restaurant. Last Saturday, I **went** to your restaurant with my family. We **waited** for 30 minutes but nobody **came** to take our order. The food was not fresh and the **prices were** very **high**. I hope you will solve this problem and offer us **an apology**.

### Đoạn 3: Task 2 — Chủ đề môi trường (B1-B2)

**Bài gốc (có lỗi):**

> In recent years, the enviroment pollution become a serious problem in Vietnam. There are many factories release toxic waste to the river. The goverment has implement many policies to protect enviroment, however it is not enough. In my opinion, we should raise people awareness about this issue. Moreover, the companies who violate the law should be punish severely.

**Phân tích lỗi:**

| # | Lỗi | Loại | Sửa |
| --- | --- | --- | --- |
| 1 | enviroment (×2) | Chính tả | **environment** |
| 2 | pollution become | Thì + hòa hợp | pollution **has become** |
| 3 | factories release | Cấu trúc | factories **that release** |
| 4 | release... to the river | Giới từ | release... **into** rivers |
| 5 | goverment | Chính tả | **government** |
| 6 | has implement | Thì | has **implemented** |
| 7 | however it | Dấu câu | however**,** it / **;** however**,** |
| 8 | people awareness | Sở hữu | **people's** awareness |
| 9 | companies who | Đại từ quan hệ | companies **that/which** |
| 10 | should be punish | Bị động | should be **punished** |

**Bản sửa:**

> In recent years, **environmental** pollution **has become** a serious problem in Vietnam. There are many factories **that release** toxic waste **into** rivers. The **government** has **implemented** many policies to protect the **environment****;** however**,** it is not enough. In my opinion, we should raise **people's** awareness about this issue. Moreover, the companies **that** violate the law should be **punished** severely.

### Đoạn 4: Task 2 — Chủ đề công nghệ (B2)

**Bài gốc (có lỗi):**

> Nowadays, technology effects every aspects of our lives. Many people argue that technology make our life easier, while others believe it has negative impacts. In one hand, technology helps us to communicating with each other more conveniently. Students can access to a wide range of information on internet. In the other hand, spending too much time on social media lead to many health problems, such as obesity and depression.

**Phân tích lỗi:**

| # | Lỗi | Loại | Sửa |
| --- | --- | --- | --- |
| 1 | effects | Từ vựng | **affects** (động từ) |
| 2 | every aspects | Số ít/nhiều | every **aspect** |
| 3 | technology make | Hòa hợp chủ-vị | technology **makes** |
| 4 | In one hand... In the other hand | Thành ngữ | **On the one hand... On the other hand** |
| 5 | helps us to communicating | Dạng động từ | helps us **communicate** / helps us **to communicate** |
| 6 | access to | Cấu trúc | **access** (không cần to) |
| 7 | on internet | Mạo từ | on **the** internet |
| 8 | spending... lead to | Hòa hợp chủ-vị | spending... **leads** to |

### Đoạn 5: Task 1 — Thư xin lỗi (B1)

**Bài gốc (có lỗi):**

> Dear Mr. Tuan, I am writing to apologize about missing the meeting yesterday. I was stuck in a traffic jam and my phone run out of battery so I could not contact to you. I very regret for this inconvenience. I promise this will not happen in the future. I would like to reschedule the meeting in a time that is convenient for you. I look forward to hear from you.

**Phân tích lỗi:**

| # | Lỗi | Loại | Sửa |
| --- | --- | --- | --- |
| 1 | apologize about | Giới từ | apologize **for** |
| 2 | phone run out | Thì | phone **ran** out |
| 3 | contact to you | Giới từ thừa | **contact you** (bỏ to) |
| 4 | I very regret | Cấu trúc | I **deeply regret** / I am **very sorry for** |
| 5 | happen in the future | Giới từ | happen **again** / happen **in the future** (chấp nhận được) |
| 6 | reschedule... in a time | Giới từ | reschedule... **at** a time |
| 7 | look forward to hear | Dạng động từ | look forward to **hearing** |

**Bản sửa:**

> Dear Mr. Tuan, I am writing to apologize **for** missing the meeting yesterday. I was stuck in a traffic jam and my phone **ran** out of battery, so I could not **contact** you. I **deeply regret** this inconvenience. I promise this will not happen again. I would like to reschedule the meeting **at** a time that is convenient for you. I look forward to **hearing** from you.

### Tổng kết — Top 5 lỗi cần tránh nhất

1. **Hòa hợp chủ-vị** — luôn kiểm tra chủ ngữ số ít hay số nhiều.
2. **Sai thì động từ** — xác định ngữ cảnh quá khứ hay hiện tại.
3. **Sai giới từ** — học collocations (interested in, apologize for, spend on).
4. **Fragment / Run-on** — mỗi câu phải có đủ chủ ngữ + vị ngữ.
5. **Lỗi chính tả quen thuộc** — government, environment, occurred.

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