Đề luyện Writing số 1 — Task 1 + Task 2 kèm bài mẫu

Đề luyện Writing VSTEP số 1 gồm Task 1 (thư formal xin nghỉ phép) và Task 2 (essay về giáo dục trẻ em) kèm bài mẫu band B1-B2 có phân tích.

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Đề luyện Writing VSTEP — Số 1

Thời gian: 60 phút (20 phút Task 1 + 40 phút Task 2). Hãy tự viết bài trước khi xem bài mẫu.

TASK 1 — Viết thư formal (120 từ trở lên)

You are a government employee. You need to take one week off work for personal reasons. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:

  • explain why you need to take time off
  • state the exact dates you will be absent
  • describe how your work will be covered during your absence

Bài mẫu Task 1 (~155 từ):

Dear Ms. Thanh,

I am writing to request one week of leave from work due to a family matter that requires my immediate attention. My elderly mother, who lives in Quang Binh province, has recently been hospitalized and needs someone to accompany her during her treatment and recovery.

I would like to take leave from Monday, August 4th, to Friday, August 8th, and will return to work on Monday, August 11th.

To ensure that my responsibilities are covered during my absence, I have spoken with my colleague, Mr. Duc, who has kindly agreed to handle my ongoing projects and attend any scheduled meetings on my behalf. I have also prepared a detailed handover document outlining the current status of each task and any deadlines that need to be met.

I apologize for any inconvenience this may cause and would be grateful if you could approve my leave request.

Yours sincerely,
Nguyen Thi Hoa

Phân tích bài mẫu Task 1:

Tiêu chíNhận xét
Task AchievementĐủ 3 ý: lý do (mẹ ốm), ngày nghỉ cụ thể (4-8/8), bàn giao công việc (đồng nghiệp + tài liệu)
CoherenceLogic: lý do → ngày → giải pháp → xin lỗi. Từ nối: "To ensure that", "I have also"
VocabularyChuyên nghiệp: immediate attention, hospitalized, handover document, on my behalf
GrammarMệnh đề quan hệ (who lives, who has agreed), phân từ (outlining), bị động (need to be met)

TASK 2 — Viết bài luận (250 từ trở lên)

Some people believe that children should start learning foreign languages at primary school. Others think they should begin at secondary school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Bài mẫu Task 2 (~290 từ):

The question of when children should begin learning foreign languages has been a subject of debate among educators and parents. While some advocate for starting at primary school, others believe that secondary school is a more appropriate time. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own view.

On the one hand, there are compelling reasons for introducing foreign languages at primary school. Research has shown that young children have a natural ability to acquire languages more quickly and with better pronunciation than older learners. Starting early allows students to build a strong foundation that they can develop throughout their academic career. Furthermore, early exposure to foreign languages can broaden children's cultural awareness and enhance their cognitive development, including improved memory and problem-solving skills.

On the other hand, some educators argue that secondary school students are better equipped to learn foreign languages effectively. At this age, students have already developed strong literacy skills in their mother tongue, which can facilitate the learning of a second language. Moreover, secondary school students can understand complex grammar rules more easily and are more capable of independent study. There is also the practical concern that primary school teachers in many areas may lack the qualifications to teach foreign languages properly.

In my opinion, children should ideally start learning foreign languages at primary school, provided that schools can ensure qualified teachers and age-appropriate teaching methods. The benefits of early language acquisition are well-documented, and delaying this process until secondary school means missing a critical window of opportunity for language development.

In conclusion, while both views have merit, the advantages of early language learning outweigh the challenges. Governments should invest in training primary school teachers to deliver quality foreign language education from an early age.

Phân tích bài mẫu Task 2:

Tiêu chíNhận xét
Task AchievementBàn luận đầy đủ 2 quan điểm + nêu ý kiến cá nhân rõ ràng
CoherenceBố cục 4 đoạn rõ ràng, từ nối đa dạng: Furthermore, Moreover, On the other hand
VocabularyNâng cao: compelling reasons, cognitive development, facilitate, age-appropriate, well-documented
GrammarCâu phức (provided that, which can), bị động (are well-documented), phân từ (including)
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