Task 1 — Thư đề xuất / Giới thiệu (Recommendation Letter)
Thư đề xuất yêu cầu bạn viết thư giới thiệu hoặc đề xuất một ý tưởng, giải pháp, hoặc gợi ý cho ai đó. Giọng văn cần thuyết phục và có lập luận.
1. Cấu trúc thư đề xuất
| Phần | Nội dung | Số câu |
|---|---|---|
| Mở thư | Nêu mục đích: đề xuất / giới thiệu điều gì | 1-2 câu |
| Thân bài 1 | Đề xuất cụ thể + lý do / ưu điểm | 2-3 câu |
| Thân bài 2 | Lợi ích / kết quả mong đợi + bằng chứng hỗ trợ | 2-3 câu |
| Kết thư | Tóm tắt đề xuất + mong phản hồi | 1-2 câu |
2. Useful Phrases — Thư đề xuất
Mở thư:
- I am writing to suggest / recommend / propose…
- I would like to put forward a suggestion regarding…
Trình bày đề xuất:
- I would strongly recommend… because…
- In my opinion, the best option would be to…
- One major advantage of this approach is that…
Lợi ích:
- This would help to… / This would result in…
- Not only would it…, but it would also…
- Based on my experience, I believe this would be beneficial because…
Kết thư:
- I hope you will consider my suggestion.
- I would be happy to discuss this further if needed.
- I trust that this recommendation will be of help.
3. Đề mẫu
Your workplace is planning to improve employee wellness. Write a letter to your manager to make a suggestion. In your letter:
- describe your suggestion for improving employee wellness
- explain the benefits of your suggestion
- offer to help organize the initiative
Write at least 120 words.
4. Bài viết mẫu (~150 từ)
Dear Ms. Nga,
I am writing to suggest an idea for improving employee wellness in our department. I believe that organizing weekly yoga sessions would greatly benefit our staff's physical and mental health.
I would recommend holding the sessions every Wednesday from 5:00 to 6:00 p.m. in the conference room on the third floor. We could invite a professional yoga instructor from a nearby fitness center. The cost would be approximately 500,000 VND per session, which could be covered by the department's budget for employee activities.
The benefits of this initiative would be significant. Not only would it help employees reduce stress after a long working day, but it would also improve team bonding and overall productivity. Several studies have shown that regular exercise increases concentration and reduces sick leave.
I would be happy to help organize the sessions and coordinate with the yoga center if you approve this suggestion.
I look forward to hearing your thoughts.
Yours sincerely,
Vu Thi F
5. Phân tích bài mẫu
| Tiêu chí | Nhận xét |
|---|---|
| Task Achievement | Đủ 3 ý: đề xuất yoga, lợi ích (giảm stress, tăng năng suất), sẵn sàng tổ chức |
| Coherence | Liên kết chặt chẽ: "Not only… but also", "Several studies have shown" |
| Vocabulary | Nâng cao: physical and mental health, team bonding, overall productivity, sick leave |
| Grammar | Đảo ngữ (Not only would it), câu điều kiện (if you approve), bị động (could be covered) |